Artfully Said–Best Foot Forward?

Franz von Lenbach, Marion Lenbach, The Artist’s Daughter, 1900, The Metropolitan Museum of Art, New York, NY (Public Domain)

Imagine that you are a painter and the parent of Marion Lenbach. Is this the painting you would create of her for all the world to see? If so, what do you like about it? If not, what would you change? Write a painting that we can see.